Saturday, August 7, 2010
Discussion of the First Assignment
I had to wait until Saturday, which is today, to start working on this post because everyone in my family is finally free since my parents do not have to go to work on the weekends. There are only four members in our family which includes me so I only have three people to help me out with this assignment. I wish there was one more person but I don’t want to bother my cousins or my neighbor because they might me having a family vacation. I guess Ms. Perez wanted us to gather a group of no less than four people but I think three is just enough. Anyways, I gave my mom, dad, and my older sister each a copy of my first group essay for them to read over. In return, they each provided me with some feedback on how I could improve. They told me that the essay seem a bit awkward since some of the parts did not fit very well together. They said there were some repetitiveness within the essay which I also have noticed.
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I think your post was interesting. I liked the part about just three people. For me it was difficult to gather enough people and have them read over my assignment. I also found that my assignment for group one was very awkward. The reason is because someone decided they would be lazy and turn in their part ten minutes till the due date and give us no time to edit or redo the paper. So we ended up with a paper that was completely out of sync. I'm not too sure about these online assignments. I think we should have done these assignments individually because it has been a pain to do group work effectively online.
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